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Submitted by: jorgesarcos On: June 18th, 2004
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Artist's Comment:
My own Personal Heaven,
taken from my mind
taken from my heart,
the gates open as i come inside,
feels like i´ve been here before,
a strange wind passes and screams "Come! dont be shy!",
as i walk something feels behind,
i turn over i see my life,
Forgive me father for being so mad!
Forgive me father for being so sad!
from this soul i wish to die,
because i made a crime,
i dont deserve another live,
i had one without love,
i dont want life anymore,
the same voice screams again,
"You deserve all the pain!"
everything begins to turn strange,
i start to run but i feel pain,
i stop and realize this is not a game,
i turn over again
im trying hard to strop crying,
but pain soon takes my life,
this is my personal heaven?
i ask to myself,
then i must tell...
this is my personal hell!
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Please see "Personal Hell" at my gallery (at DeviantART)
This is the first time i do writte something for a deviation so please comment it, also forgive me, my english is limited as i am from Venezuela and i speak Spanish as my main language. =)
Render Time: (at original size: 2500x1875) 01h 35mins 16segs at 733Mhz
-= COMPLETELY made in Bryce =-
(Signature in Photoshop)
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The text is great, a little sad. It's very sensitive. 
Inspiration Artwork 2001 - 2005 © My Page! > [ link ]
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I love it.
   Gothiqua Updated 3 May 2004
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thanx! =)
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-=JFS=-
Im Straight Real so dont get mad by my comments!
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WOW Jorge,Great job in bryce,2 thumbs up.
Let him who desires peace,prepare for war.
--vegetius
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wow....this is killer stuff! Excellent job, very eye-catching!
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Thats beautiful.
Love almost anything and everything blue or grey......nice!!!
- JUSBLAZE -
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Nice one!
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