Nice attempt 4ds.....pay more attention to the pressure you put on the pencil. When the lines are too strong in areas it takes your eye off the picture as a whole & concentrates them on the lines only. Which in this case does not work so well. Also look at the proportions...should there not be a nose ,. Well because of the anime style the nose would not be seen, so would it not be better to zoom in on the eye more to give a better effect? Also you are lapsing on you shading. As I said before...it helps to build the character. Soz...just trying to be helpful and telling you what I understand. One tip is to browse AU and look at the work of Priest and a few others & get some tips. I think lines work differently on tonal sketches than they do on coloured pictures.
I would blame the rip artists for the lack of votes, comments and ratings.
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