Artist's Comment: I'm a smoker, i wish i wasn't. I thought of this just now sitting outside with a cigarette.
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smoke
curling on the air
dancing before my eyes
beauty, poison
sweet scent filling room
playing with my apetite
desire, addiction
how can such poetry
come from a cigarette
want, disgust.
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Review by:ambrohzeRating:
Not Rated Posted: November 22nd, 2004
I like poetry that comes straight from your head unto a piece of paper. The unedited I think turns out better because those are your true thoughts.
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