This is a very romantic poem and has real feeling, or longing. I think many people could relate to it. Those that have admired someone from afar, or fallen for them in a big way. The wait for pleasant acknowledgement, the dream of a heart-felt embrace.
I'm not sure if this is the right place for a poem, although it is art. Maybe a new catagory could be set up for Poetic Art....whether they are poems attached to pictures, or pictures that have deep meaning. It maybe worth a try to check it out..
Great poem though, and good luck in your moment.
I would blame the rip artists for the lack of votes, comments and ratings.
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A nice poem, but you have to strain to read it in places....'cause they are to bright
Why do I have to grow up?
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lol I know, here's what it says:
"Your Profile"
Feeling a connection so abrupt and it’s with you
I wanna sit behind you to get a better view
I’m not in love with your smile
Your style or the way I can feel you from a mile
I’m in love with your profile
The dark sunglasses you wear inside
Hiding the feelings you have that pass me by
Your presence I feel from a far
I can hear your smile no matter where you are
I love to see you sing to me
The way it seems us forever is a guarantee
You wait for a sign so patiently
Till I smile back assuringly
Revealing you are always on my mind
Because It’s like our hearts are intertwined
]....LadyV...>>
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He's a lucky guy.
It's a beautiful poem.
"Hail To The Jim, Baby..."
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