i got the point of it but it wasnt expressed in all the right ways. dont take it the wrong way ur piece is great, its just that i was feelin all of the lines but its overall very good
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I never played Twisted Metal Black, but I was addicted to Twisted Metal 1 and 2, so I can understand where you get your inspiration, Great job.
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my favourite Stanza was the first, it was awesome, nice use of words, some grammar errors, but Who doesnt make those nice job
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Yngwie malmsteen, Joe Satriani, Shawn Lane, Paul Gilbert, Steve Vai, MArty Friedman, Dave Murray, Adrian Smith.
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o and also, maybe move the paragraphs into the middle rather then the side i just think it would look better.
o and my vote
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Yngwie malmsteen, Joe Satriani, Shawn Lane, Paul Gilbert, Steve Vai, MArty Friedman, Dave Murray, Adrian Smith.
the shredders 
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okay, thanks, i changed it.
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not one of your greatest, but its pretty good
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