Good color combo...but it looks like the text and the paw are fighting for dominance and end up cancelling each other out. Try for a slightly larger paw and put the text in front. That may help you!
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ek, not sure I agree with ImStien2.... I can't put my finger on it, but the paw really doesn't work well, and I think something differnt should be done with the text...
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This is good but everyone here isn't helping you much I think. Blondebabe has no idea what she thinks and no good ideas either it seems.
I would bring the paw print down underneath the text. (move the print down) Then they wont overpower each other. Immy is right they are fighting for dominance. Trying other variations might help.
Blondebabe your a witch...giving one star. Why even rate it, your a big insperation...then what do you expect from a cartoonist...who claims to be a graphic designer. HA!!!!
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Posted: June 19th, 2004
