Hmmm...well,I like the poem alot.It's very strong,deep,and good,but most importantly it has a message.The graphic,however,seems a bit chaotic and uncomplimentary of the text lettering.In other words,I don't think the background suits the lettering.Perhaps if the background were darkened,just a suggestion.Otherwise,a very nice piece.
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kind of hard to read the text with that BG,need's a darker BG,what i can read of it is nice ruffy,i believe if you darken the BG some,it will be even better,well done..
Let him who desires peace,prepare for war.
--vegetius
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thanks for the comments, yeah i tried darkening it guess it wasn't enough lol..
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Love the poem, love the message, love the context, etc., but have to agree about the BG.
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Great poem, love it, but of course about the BG.
Anyway great poem and as of course your message rocks
When all else fails...
learn to fall
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