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Submitted by: 6 BlackMateria On: June 18th, 2004
File Size: 164
Downloads: 44
Views: 368
Comments: 4
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Artist's Comment:
My soul condemned
My wounds try to mend
I share not my retribution
This is my revolution
My soul was lent
I try to repent
I can not bare this torment
This is my way
This is the price I have to pay
The fires ar burning
My heart is twisting and turning
I gave you my warning
You will now know the meaning of true pain
You'll be stuck on my hell train
I ask you now "Am I sane?"
Don't cross my path
or you will feel my wrath
You better not retreat
I dare not repeat
Remember I am the elite
I will kill the one who destroyed me
I will kill my enemy
Vengence will be mine
This is my time....


I now have done it
My soul was condemned
My wounds have mend
It is now the end

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Review by: 6 Cloud Rating: Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Posted: June 19th, 2004
Wow BM, this is a great leap from where you were. And thanks for rhyming it Emotion Icon but this truly is great. And now I give a poem to you (or try, lol):

Though you said you couldnt rhyme,
You worked hard and in time,
The piece turned out great, it really is,
So have fun, good work kid Emotion Icon


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Know your limits.
Break them.
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Review by: 8 hausiyoka Rating: Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Posted: June 19th, 2004
WOW Black you've done a wonderful job on your poem! And i agree with Cloud...you have grown! Keep up the great work!!!


Smile and my heart smiles too ;o)
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Review by: 4 lilruffrydr Rating: Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Posted: June 19th, 2004
wow that is a great poem Emotion Icon


]....LadyV...>>
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Review by: 3 lizardskin Rating: Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Posted: September 11th, 2004
nice job , butt again with the rhyming, try something different next time


Quote:
no one wants to here about it, so dont even think it moron

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