I think you can refine this and make it very interesting to look at (not that it isn't already). The size is unwieldly, takes up the whole screen so that I can't see the whole thing at once. If you adjust the size, it would be a good start. Also, I think the idea of this piece is good. It looks like you were going for two objects in orbit above the Earth. If you refine
the view of the Earth and adjust the variance of gray on blue(the color difference in the backround, indicated by the gray to blue half way up the picture), the piece will have more continuity. Refine the two objects in orbit and YOUR THERE!!! After all, caught my eye enough in the preview to make me look further. I would like to see you refine this one. Take care.
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