It's still a nice manipulation nonetheless. I don't readily see any flaws. Those flaws you see must be things that you were thinking you wanted to do but never got around to, or perhaps things that didn't go quite the way you wanted them to. No matter. I don't really see any flaws. It does still look pretty good for being a first try at your artistic manipulation. Almost as if it's a scene off a movie or something. Or a newscast. Nice though. |
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the last comment was by me I don't know why but it signed me out as it posted and lost my name Great job! |
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The only flaw I see is that the font at the top is completely illegible. ^_^;; Other than that, this is wonderful! I love the dark colors!
Bow to me, puny mortal, for I am Liz Staley, Goddess of the WORLD! |
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I think it's really good. The tonal contrasts really add to this piece. Of course a splash of red here and there never hurts either. 
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"You spend whatever time you have left dying, or you spend it living. "
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I really like this one...  |
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hun this is a really nice manip, and the skin detailing is cool...wayyy better than anything i can do. the only flaw i can see is that it's too dark to make out a lot of what you did to it (though maybe thats just my monitor), but if thats what you were going for then hey..good show! what i'm getting at here in my roundabout babbling way is that for your first try, this is awesome work 
Noli Mi Tangere!
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On ne voit bien qu'avec le coeur, l'essential c'est invisible pour les yeux. |
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Flaws? They aren't noticeable Jay, just to manip artists eyes It's good for your first and I see you've come a loooong way. Good work as always!
I hope everyone suffers because with suffering comes gratitude |
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I like this because it shows how much better you can make your artwork by simply implying things with lights and darks, in this case a lot of the figure is hidden in shadow, which gives a better feeling to the work. |
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