welcome to au skin. Anyway the whole point of this site is to comment on other works to make them better so don't worry about your level. I think this is up to par generally. This is better than someof the other stuff i have seen on this site.
I kind of wish the face wasn't so dark because its hard to see and maybe having the whole figure instead of having him cropped. Or maybe just below the waist so we can see him holding the sword. Right now it looks like both hands are holding the sword but i am not sure if that is what you were going for. Also the sword just stops and it looks like it got slanted on the edge. Thats all i cna think of right now. Sorry for being so picky but i am only trying to help.
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