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Submitted by: blackmateria On: June 18th, 2004
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Artist's Comment: I now know what she can do to me
I now see clearly
She holds my life in her hands
She left me bleeding
I don’t know where I am anymore
My heart feels sore
I can’t stand this pain
I don’t know who I am anymore
Is this a broken heart?
Is it our time to part?
I’m so confused
I feel so bruised
Has she left me to die?
Is it time to say goodbye?
So many questions, so many feelings
My heart is burning
I shouldn’t feel this way
Doesn’t anyone hear what I have to say?
I am now screaming
Is this feeling leaving?
I feel the opposite of when it began
I no longer feel like a man
I’m just a small boy
I’m just someone’s toy
My heart now beats slowly
I have awoken into reality
Is this a dream?
Have I awoken in hell?
No one will help
I’m bleeding internally
Does anyone care about me?
I now understand
To become a man
I must withstand this torture
I shall always love her
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alright everyone....i'm wasn't feeling to well when i wrote this, but it only took me 5 min to write.....making it the shortest one it ever took me to write. Well I just found out horrible news....and it hurt....it's about a girl....i still love her.....but it hurts........ah why should anyone care?
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I... I don't know what to say. I'm on the verge of tears right now, so I might not be thinking clearly, but I know exactly how you feel. It's a beautiful poem.
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Wow. Those last few lines are the best!
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again joe, you make my emotions rage.... i know your pain, not a good thing to feel, i hope you feel better
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