i wish there was better contrast because the two figures are blending in to each other. It also looks smudgy for some reason. that could be because of a ban scan or something. im not sure. Oh and why does the guy standing of one really big finger? it looks wrong. And another thing you should look out for is having really heavy outlines. it looks like you went over the outerline a lot. There are some anatomical problems with the figure that is standing. His left shoulder should be bigger than the rest of his arm. You have it shorter. His neck is a weird size that doesn't make sense. necks don't go in that direction. its usually a little straighter. On the giant face there are some minor drawing issues with it. Maybe you should look a reference on what a profile looks like. i wish there was some more variety in the line weight because the line seems the same throughout. you can really do a lot more with the line. otherwise its an itneresting abstract image. Sorry for nit picking but you posted it here so here are my thoughts. hope they are helpful.
Ian Topple
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