Generally the drawing is quite good. The only thing that worries me a little bit is the head, it's slightly too small. BUt apart from that, keep practicing.  |
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just like the soberaenima said, the haid is small.
in addition, the shoulders are huge, for a girl.
looks like the shoulder is separated from the head.
but its a very lovely pose, and nice shading
work on it, keep practicing  |
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sorry, but who broke her the shoulder and where is her right nipple?
furthermore the shadows have all the same grey scale - no difference > no depth.
and why do u sign the picture straight over her arse?  |
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