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I'm Sorry I Can't Be Perfect

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Submitted by: 4 aliennvasion On: October 20th, 2004
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This was an assignment for english class last year. The assignment was to write a story based on a song and incorporate part of the song into the story. The song I choose was Perfect by Simple Plan. I don't really like how it ends... someday I may add more but until now, have a read and let me know what you think!

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Review by: 7 prplflwr20 Rating: Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Posted: May 6th, 2005
Very cool...I can understand your feelings about the ending. It feels unfinished. I find myself wondering what happens next. Does his dad get even more ticked off and throw MacKenzie out? Does he pull up his grades? Does Mark come home having lost his job due to his recently acquired addiction to prescription painkillers? I feel it needs more and you have the opportunity the way the story is at present to take it anywhere you want it to go and for many, many more paragraphs. Emotion Icon


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"I smile becuz I have no idea what's going on...and I'm trying to keep it that way.", she said as she stuck her fingers in her ears and started to sing, "La,la,la,la....La,la,la,la". Emotion Icon
 

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how come if i edit my artwork it doesnt update in full sized view? it only worked in the thumbnail
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