For me, paintings tend to evolve during creation so i'm going to reserve my comment until the finished article 
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hey man this aint half bad keep it up.
>>vjevic [endtransmission]
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ok, well you did ask in the chat box......
I like the 'fast and loose' style, but you should be aware of how texture in paint changes the perspective of things.
Your flooring looks like it is not flat due to the texture in the floor and the 'horizon' line is not straight.
the bottle is good, but you lose it a little in the dark flooring.
the table cloth is good to but the use of texture has changed the perspective of the drop on the front edge and looks a bit wrong.
the red of the tablecloth does make the bottle stand out but you may be better served by changing the colour of the floor to a cool colour which is not as dark.
I can't really tell whether the gold/brown item is a chair or a bed. that needs to be sorted.
On a compositional note, i find still life paintings often look better with an odd number of items. this old trick tends to draw the eye into the painting and keep attention whereas even numbers tend to allow the eye to wander off and away from the painting.
I hope all of this doesn't put you off, these are merely things I would do if this was my painting, which it isn't. You must do as you see fit! This is already far better than my first attempt with oils
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