I like this drawing very much, I notice the sholders are a bit thin and narrow on the figure to the left. I understand some people are very thin, but the proportions look a little off to me, I hope this helps.
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I agree, some people are thin, however with the proportions given it doesn't seem right. Even if you are drawing from real life, it is always good to cheat it and exagerate certain things or make alterations so that your art can stand alone, without explainging it is from realism. Sorry, kinda long comment. I like it, great job! Just something to consider. :3
and with a great and sour fart, he turned his mighty steed...
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a bit thin yes but still very nice.These image look ready to giggle at any moment
So I would say you did good
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this is good. maybe some shading next time?
"You Only Live Once".
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I agree with godsign....Press a little on that pencil to create depth..I think it's cool.....but who am I?....peace 
A people denied history is a people deprived of dignity. - Ali A. Mazrui, Kenyan scholar
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Portraits,esp. self-portraits always seem to be the toughest for me. You are very talented,pretty also!
I want you to know that I just joined this site, and you are the first artist I am commenting on. I hope I can post more of my worx here soon. Thank you for sharing this finely drawn portrait! As far as what you should do to improve your style, I would have to say, just keep doing it! It will always get better if you keep at it.
Hope this helps, and I love to hear what other's think of my stuff also.
Dave Adam
Manteo,NC
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Ok well I did some editing, pls comment on the changes.. I hope it looks some what better.. cheers for the comments guys. 
