I don't know you, so I'll ask ... do you want just a simple generalised comment on your writing, or a more detailed critique with suggestions? There were certainly some good ideas in the piece.
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I invent nothing. I rediscover. ~ Auguste Rodin ~
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lets go w/ the detailed critique |
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