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Submitted by: 2 translucent On: June 17th, 2005
File Size: 532 KB
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Rating: Not Rated

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Artist's Comment:
That wicked Cold,

reflections of an empty face-
dead without feeling life-
death with every step of life-

are the Reflections really reflections?

reflections of an empty heart-
plastered with indifference-
cauterized by steel sentiment-

what if what i see is not what You see?

reflections of an empty soul-
drowning in a pool of Pale-
covered in a film of Flesh
drowning in a lake of Red

can i see the Truth?

I'm Dieing To Live

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Review by: 7 yddraig Rating: Not Rated Posted: June 19th, 2005
I don't know you, so I'll ask ... do you want just a simple generalised comment on your writing, or a more detailed critique with suggestions? There were certainly some good ideas in the piece.


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I invent nothing. I rediscover. ~ Auguste Rodin ~
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Review by: 2 translucent Rating: Not Rated Posted: June 20th, 2005
lets go w/ the detailed critique
 

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