Interesting idea ... though I see memories as somewhat more bittersweet than that. Nicely written, though.
one typo: meat = meet
Also did you mean 'face to face' [which would rhyme with place]
or was 'fate to fate' a deliberate play on words.
yddraig0
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Fate to fate was a deliberate play on words. I thought I had fixed the meatmeet error thank you for bringing it to my attention. |
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Beautiful sentiment! The wording is wonderful and I understand the "fate to fate". People don't often realize that each person in a relationshop shares their fate with the other, whether they want to or not.
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