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Submitted by: 1 twizz3985 On: July 29th, 2005
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02 BECOMING REAL
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I was running in the dark. A cloaked man was chasing me. I was screaming and running for my life. Yelling for help... no one came.

"Stop or I'll kill you!" The cloaked man yelled. I didn't answer nor did I stop. I looked behind me as I ran and I saw him pointing a gun at me. A loud shot rang through the darkness. I instantly stopp. I couldn't speak... barely able to move. I put my hands to my gut and slowly brought them back up to my face. Blood... So much blood. I fell to my knees clutching my gut and a coughed up blood. The cloaked man was now standing behind me. He grabbed my hair and took a knife to my throat.

"We'll end this quickly." He said as he sliced my neck. I collapsed to the ground. The word: Dead... reapeated over and over like a broken record in my mind.

I woke up instantly and looked around. I was in Dimitri's bed. I sat up and looked at my hands... they were bloody. I began to panic as I lifted up my shirt and it revealed a dark brose wehre I was shot in my dream. I pushed the covers off me instantly and started screaming. Dimitri ran in and I ran past him to his bathroom. I turned the faucet on and threw my hands under the burning water. Dimitri ran in and saw my blood covered hands.

"Oh my god! Cecilia, What the hell happend!?" He yelled as he ran over to me.

"I don't know! I woke up with blood on my hands!" I screamed hysterically.

Dimitri walked over and got a towel from the closet. I took my hands out from under the boiling water. Dimitri grabbed my hands in the towel and began to dry them off. My eyes were wide and I felt like I was going to pass out again.

"Cecilia? Are you okay?" Dimitri said as he noticed that I was waving back and forth and had a tired look in my eyes. "Cecilia?" I began to fall and Dimitri caught me and embraced me in a hug. "Cecilia.." He picked me up and brought me to his room. He placed me on his bed again. I was drifting to sleep but trying to stay awake. My body was limp and I couldn't move. I was in a sort of dazed like fashion. Dimitri sat next to me on the bed. He took his knuckles and began to caress my face. I smiled a the small gesture. He stopped. "I'll be back in a few minutes." He got up and left the room shutting the door behind him. I was alone again. I stared endlessly at the ceiling... waiting for him to return.

I had almost fallen asleep when Dimitri walked back into the room. "Cecilia? Are you awake." He said quietly as he shut the door behind him.

"Yeah... I think so." I said quietly still staring at the ceiling.

"That's good. Mind telling me what happened?" He said as he sat down next to me on the bed again. He took my hand in his.

"I had a dream and I got shot and had blood all over my hands. I woke up and lifted up my shirt and had a brose where I was shot and my hands were bloody." I said still staring at the ceiling.

"Cecilia... you do know that's impossible right?" He said letting go of my hand.

"Well... It sure the hell must be cause it obviously happened." I stated and looked over at him.

"Cecilia..." He said disbelievingly.

"Dimitri... why won't you believe me?" I said looking away from him. I stared out his window. It was raining.

"I dont' know what to believe. Maybe it's your medication?" He stated. I didn't even want to believe this was real. I was so scared and my best friend didn't even believe me. If he doesn't believe me, who will?

"I have the brose... want me to shoy you?" I said as I pulled up my shirt till it revealed the large round brose just werhe the ribs parted.

"Oh my god. What did you do, Cecilia?" He said staring at the large brose.

"I didn't do this to myself! Why would I do that!?" I said as I began to cry.

"I'm sorry, Cecilia. I... I didn't mean to make you cry." Dimitri said as he took me in his arms and held me close. "I'm sorry." Dimitri looked at my arms and noticed all the cuts. He thought to himself... 'Why is she so sad all the time. Can I make her happy?' "Cecilia... why are you... uhhh... never mind."

"Why am I what?" I said between sobs.

"Nothing... just forget about it." He said. (change in point of view) He looked at her red lips... He was wondering to himself what it would be like to kiss her.(normal pov) He took his hand and placed in on my chin and lifted my head up. "Shhh... Cecilia." He said as he brought his lips to mind and kissed me gently. I closed my eyes and stopped crying. He hugged me tighter while we were still kissing and I placed my arms around his neck. A few moments later we ended out kiss and he looked into my eyes.

"Dimitri..." I said hugging him back.

"Cecilia... I'll always be here for you. If you ever need me... I'll be gald to help. I love you." He said tenderly. It was that instant that I knew we had become more than friends. I smiled and looked into his eyes. Then I rested my head on his chest and fell asleep in his arms.

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Review by: 7 prplflwr20 Rating: Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Personal Rating Star Posted: August 2nd, 2005
In the first installment, you left me with a feeling of the Angel of Death over your shoulder. I've experienced similiar happenings, although I didn't have any blood, I did have bruising. Your imagery really brings to life the situation and I wait with baited breath for the next chapter in your tale!


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Review by: 1 twizz3985 Rating: Not Rated Posted: August 2nd, 2005
thank you very much ^_^ I have up to chapter 9 done... i just need to draw a pic for each one lol
 

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