zooni, nice anime attempt
but here are some advice i got from a comic man
look, u need to make more different kinds of shots "close, near, and far
for example, the second shot could be very near to her face, and the one after it a bit further, to give more action to ur story.
and the last shot..i think u need to redraw it, k?
anyway, good job |
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