zooni, u seem to be improving in the comic thingy
but, there are just 2 mistakes in this strip
in the 1st shot, i think the girl needs alot more excitement and shock in her eyes, if u need to show that she's scared. if the problem is the hair on her eye, then remove it for the sake of the expression.
in the 5th shot "last one" i think it will be alot more expressive if u gave a dark background wih her sitting in a spot of light.
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