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Wow, crick. I'm impressed. This is very well-constructed. Who would've thought there was a poet under that exoskeleton of yours, hehe.... I like the whole poem, but I must admit the title is what got my attention to have a look at it. hehe, you know me....
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Very nice, crick .. good imagery, free verse with a sense of structure. Only one thing -- I think you were going for "sown" not "sewn." 
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I´m insane. What´s his excuse? |
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d'oh!
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nice. gives you a wierd feeling twords the end... or maybe its just me...
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nice poem!
very dramatic :D
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† §håðøw †
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I'm Mr. Brightside
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nice poem!
very dramatic :D
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† §håðøw †
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I'm Mr. Brightside
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